Transcript text: To whom it may concern:
Subject: Information on Request
We were sad to see you sent in a letter complaining about your defective car stereo system's warranty. Let me explain our policy regarding warranties. We normally honor warranties only from the date of purchase; however, because your situation is special, we will have to comply with your request. My supervisor has agreed to replace your unit for free.
Choose the best revision for the salutation.
Dear Sir:
Mr. Enriquez:
Dear Mr. Enriquez:
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Use a comma after the greeting to be more friendly.
Save the good news until the end to build anticipation.
Give readers the good news immediately.