Questions: The writer of this story wants to add the following paragraph: Molly was there when Brittney won the school award for best writer. Brittney was there when Molly caught her first mouse. Molly was Brittney's confidante, and one of their favorite activities, even as they got older, was to curl up next to a warm fire and listen to soft music. Where should this paragraph be inserted? A. between the second paragraph (sentences 3-5) and the third paragraph (sentences 6-9) B. between the sixth paragraph (sentences 17-19) and the seventh paragraph (sentences 20-21) C. between the fourth paragraph (sentences 10-12) and the fifth paragraph (sentences 13-16) D. between the eighth paragraph (sentences 22-24) and the ninth paragraph (sentences 25-27)

The writer of this story wants to add the following paragraph:
Molly was there when Brittney won the school award for best writer. Brittney was there when Molly caught her first mouse. Molly was Brittney's confidante, and one of their favorite activities, even as they got older, was to curl up next to a warm fire and listen to soft music.

Where should this paragraph be inserted?
A. between the second paragraph (sentences 3-5) and the third paragraph (sentences 6-9)
B. between the sixth paragraph (sentences 17-19) and the seventh paragraph (sentences 20-21)
C. between the fourth paragraph (sentences 10-12) and the fifth paragraph (sentences 13-16)
D. between the eighth paragraph (sentences 22-24) and the ninth paragraph (sentences 25-27)
Transcript text: The writer of this story wants to add the following paragraph: Molly was there when Brittney won the school award for best writer. Brittney was there when Molly caught her first mouse. Molly was Brittney's confidante, and one of their favorite activities, even as they got older, was to curl up next to a warm fire and listen to soft music. Where should this paragraph be inserted? A. between the second paragraph (sentences 3-5) and the third paragraph (sentences 6-9) B. between the sixth paragraph (sentences 17-19) and the seventh paragraph (sentences 20-21) C. between the fourth paragraph (sentences 10-12) and the fifth paragraph (sentences 13-16) D. between the eighth paragraph (sentences $22-24$ ) and the ninth paragraph (sentences $25-27$ )
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The answer is A. between the second paragraph (sentences 3-5) and the third paragraph (sentences 6-9).

Explanation
Option A:

Inserting the paragraph between the second and third paragraphs would provide a natural transition from the introduction of Brittney and Molly's relationship to the events that follow. It gives context to their bond and highlights significant moments they shared, which enhances the emotional impact of the story.

Option B:

Placing the paragraph here would disrupt the flow of the narrative, as the sixth paragraph seems to be leading into a resolution or conclusion. The new paragraph would not fit well with the surrounding content.

Option C:

Inserting the paragraph between the fourth and fifth paragraphs would interrupt the sequence of events that are likely building up to a climax or a significant turning point in the story.

Option D:

Adding the paragraph between the eighth and ninth paragraphs would be too late in the narrative, as it seems the story is wrapping up. The emotional context provided by the new paragraph would lose its impact if placed here.

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